Wednesday 6 April 2016

Persuasive writing/New Zealand flag

New Zealand should keep the current flag!
By:Johanna
WALT Write a text that will persuade others.
In my opinion, we should keep the current NZ flag, here are my points .                                                                               


My first reason is we might get kicked out of the Commonwealth because the Silver Fern flag doesn’t have the Union Jack. Queen Elizabeth(2nd) might get offended that we don’t have the Union Jack if the Silver Fern flag wins.


Furthermore, the current flag has been with us since 1884 and we have had a great relationship with Britain in the past years.


Last but not least Australia might think we're not friends with them and Australia should change their current flag because they copied us first.

Therefore, NZ should keep the current flag. It should NOT be changed!


IALT write a persuasive text about the NZ Flag Referendum.




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Effective Strategies
  • state the issue or topic.
  • include reasons to back up your opinions.
  • sequence ideas in a logical order.
  • organise ideas in paragraphs.
  • make a recommendation in the conclusion.
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