Wednesday, 9 November 2016

Donna Dayla   
VS                                        Flarey Streak
Johanna Azuela
7th, November, 2016

It was midnight in the city of Las Vegas; Flarey Streak the super villain had just committed a daring robbery.. She ran out of the bank carrying ten million dollars .

                            The next day

Donnari (The alter ego of Donna Dayla) goes to work at a supermarket on the other side of the world, in a country called Australia. She was scanning prices of canned food from 3pm to 9pm. She strolled to her car and drove back to her house but suddenly Donnari hears three beeps on her digital watch Beep Beep Beep                                                                                                 she hurried to her closet, grabbed her superhero costume and rushed through her main door to the secret lab underneath her house.

She then sees her sidekick Fluffy pom standing beside the safe where all the weapons are kept. Fluffy tells Donna  info about the robbery committed in Las Vegas
“Hello Donna đŸ‘‹today a villain called Flarey streak has committed a robbery at midnight at Las Vegas, tomorrow me and you are going to Las vegas to meet the mayor, so that mean you should pack your bag and take a one week of leave in your work, i will see you at 4 am tomorrow bye”
“Oh my gosh are you serious, I have to work again, *sigh* I never have time to rest!”

                             The next day   
Donna took her bag and went off to her private jet with fluffy. Inside the jet she see’s, two bathrooms, one bed, two tv’s and a mini kitchen she heard that her flight is 21hr long so she waited and waited and waited.

Oh no! They see Flarey streak standing right in front of the jet with a baseball bat they fight violently across the street.
BOOM! BASH! POW! YAY!!! Donna performed amazing hits and she won although she got bruises and a black eye she was perfectly fine.

Monday, 7 November 2016

Book Selling

Title of book
The witches
Tell us about the author
Children's author Roald Dahl wrote the kids' classics Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and James and the Giant Peach, among other famous works. He was married to actress Patricia Neal.

Explain who the characters are using descriptive language.
Grand high witch is a cruel, cold-hearted woman who loves eating children
Brunos is a sneaky, greedy young boy who will do anything for food especially cookies
luke eveshim  is a curious young boy and likes his grandmother reading him mysterious stories about witches.

WALT review a novel in a way that sells it to other readers.

Extended Abstract
WALT review a novel in a way that sells it to other readers.

I can define:
  • The title of the book
  • The author
  • The main characters

I can describe the:
  • Main characters
  • The author
  • The beginning of the book
I can analyse the novel to:
  • Choose who the main characters are to describe to my audience
  • Choose what to say about the story so as to interest others but not tell them the whole story.
  • Choose an entertaining section of the novel to read out to the audience.
I can evaluate how well I have sold my book by:
  • How many questions were asked about this novel.
  • How many people have read this novel.
  • Asked 2 students for feedback about how well I presented my book sell.

Giving good feedback is to:
  • Be kind
  • Be specific
  • Be helpful
Responding to feedback is to:
  • Adjust/alter my presentations accordingly.