Thursday 31 March 2016

New Zealand should keep the current flag!
By:Johanna  Azuela
WALT Write a text that will persuade others.
In my opinion we should keep the current NZ flag, here are my points .                                                                                   


My first reason is we might get kicked out of the Commonwealth because the silver fern flag doesn’t have the Union Jack . Queen Elizabeth(2nd) might get offended that we don’t have the Union Jack if the Silver Fern flag wins.


Furthermore  is , the current flag has been with us since 1884 and we have a great relationship with Britain in the past years .


Last but not least Australia might think were not friends with them and Australia should change their current flag because they copied us first .

Therefore NZ should keep the current flag,It should NOT be changed! IALT write a persuasive text about the NZ Flag   Referendum



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Effective Strategies
  • state the issue or topic.
  • include reasons to back up your opinions.
  • sequence ideas in a logical order.
  • organise ideas in paragraphs.
  • make a recommendation in the conclusion.
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