Thursday, 31 March 2016

New Zealand should keep the current flag!
By:Johanna  Azuela
WALT Write a text that will persuade others.
In my opinion we should keep the current NZ flag, here are my points .                                                                                   


My first reason is we might get kicked out of the Commonwealth because the silver fern flag doesn’t have the Union Jack . Queen Elizabeth(2nd) might get offended that we don’t have the Union Jack if the Silver Fern flag wins.


Furthermore  is , the current flag has been with us since 1884 and we have a great relationship with Britain in the past years .


Last but not least Australia might think were not friends with them and Australia should change their current flag because they copied us first .

Therefore NZ should keep the current flag,It should NOT be changed! IALT write a persuasive text about the NZ Flag   Referendum



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Effective Strategies
  • state the issue or topic.
  • include reasons to back up your opinions.
  • sequence ideas in a logical order.
  • organise ideas in paragraphs.
  • make a recommendation in the conclusion.
  • use persuasive language
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Friday, 26 February 2016

REFLECTION ON WAIPARA CAMP!!!

WALT  work together as a team/group

I worked together as a team by listening to other ideas because they might work well 

WALT challenge ourselves to take risks

I challenged myself by doing the abseiling wall.I was really scared but I succeeded!!!!!

Wednesday, 22 July 2015

The tale of Despereaux

WALT read our novels

On the 21/07/15,our teacher gave us the right novel that we should be reading .Miss Coad gave me the tale of despereaux book to read, It took mine home so that I won't be bored.

I love the book that miss Coad gave me to read.
My next step is ... to understand more about the book

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

My poster

WALT make a poster 
My next step is to be kind to people 
I am proud of making a poster of kindness for the school ๐Ÿซ✨๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽˆ

Friday, 26 June 2015

A philippine monkey eating eagle!

WALT learn about current events from stuff.

I learned about a Philippine monkey eating eagle.
My favourite things about these animals are,when they are angry, the feathers at the top of there hair spikes up.My next step is to learn about different birds from differnt countries.

Monday, 22 June 2015

WALT read current events

The story was about a tiger mauls a man from a zoo escape after a flood.

We had to write the question from the SRL sheet and write the answers about the story.


My next step is to put more details in the answers.